GH Chapter 16 typo fix
Oct 25, 2018 11:46:26 GMT -5
Post by Not Wes on Oct 25, 2018 11:46:26 GMT -5
Mike is the old boss, Bob is the new one.
Eagle-eyed reader Boyd Percy noticed three name switches in paragraph 3 of Golden Hour's chapter 16 posting. They were all missed by editors and beta readers before posting. It has now been fixed in the Web version on the site but can't be corrected in the books sent out earlier to those who purchased them. This shouldn't affect Wiki character lists, but those of you who keep track of that sort of thing might want to note it. Those who download chapters from the Web for archive, might want to re-download chapter 16.
Paragraph 3 mentioned Mike, Kyle's old boss at the Wychbold plant, as as who arranged for helping unload Kyle's belongings in Fort Collins. Instead, this person should be his new boss, Bob, doing the deed. Bob is correctly mentioned in paragraph 9.
Those of you who notice typos like this, grammar gaffes, or other items of interest can contact me at not.wes[nospam]71 at gmail dot com -- but you have to delete the brackets and nospam between them. Note and leave the period between not and wes, but the only other period is before the com. Leave the number 71 in place. Other story notes can be directed to that address, also. If you don't get a response from me it wasn't correct. Give me a day or so to respond, and understand there will be times I'm away and not in contact with the Internet for lengthy periods. I'll try to warn people of them.
Sorry about that and thanks to Boyd
Not Wes
Eagle-eyed reader Boyd Percy noticed three name switches in paragraph 3 of Golden Hour's chapter 16 posting. They were all missed by editors and beta readers before posting. It has now been fixed in the Web version on the site but can't be corrected in the books sent out earlier to those who purchased them. This shouldn't affect Wiki character lists, but those of you who keep track of that sort of thing might want to note it. Those who download chapters from the Web for archive, might want to re-download chapter 16.
Paragraph 3 mentioned Mike, Kyle's old boss at the Wychbold plant, as as who arranged for helping unload Kyle's belongings in Fort Collins. Instead, this person should be his new boss, Bob, doing the deed. Bob is correctly mentioned in paragraph 9.
Those of you who notice typos like this, grammar gaffes, or other items of interest can contact me at not.wes[nospam]71 at gmail dot com -- but you have to delete the brackets and nospam between them. Note and leave the period between not and wes, but the only other period is before the com. Leave the number 71 in place. Other story notes can be directed to that address, also. If you don't get a response from me it wasn't correct. Give me a day or so to respond, and understand there will be times I'm away and not in contact with the Internet for lengthy periods. I'll try to warn people of them.
Sorry about that and thanks to Boyd
Not Wes